Silver Age by J. E. Cammon


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Post April 09, 2010, 06:59:29 AM

Silver Age by J. E. Cammon

A spring of heroes.
Chapters like puzzle pieces
Don't fall into place.

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Post April 15, 2010, 01:39:44 PM

Hi. Thanks for reading my story. It didn't make sense?

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Post April 15, 2010, 06:35:53 PM

Chapters

I got lost too. I couldn't figure out if the hero character(s) were fully endowed with powers or just Great Men in the tradition of Watchmen.

A simple rule of thumb is a reader wants an anchor character, and here it seemed like each of the first 5 chapters had totally new characters, though I think near the end it became apparent the names were changing.

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