Be Then What You Be

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Post November 19, 2009, 10:59:31 AM

Be Then What You Be

A lovely story. I really like these things. The words made great pictures in my mind.

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Post November 20, 2009, 06:28:00 PM

Re: Be Then What You Be

There were some lovely turns-of-phrase in this story. The writing is quite unlike anything I have ever encountered.

Very fairytaleish (if it isn't a word, it should be.)

There are a few punctuation and spelling errors that a little more proofing would find, but it only distracts a little.

But I truly enjoyed this piece, and would like to see more.

Haven't followed the link to other works, yet. I'm still working on this issue.

Great story, and very well done.

Bill Wolfe
"I am Susan Ivanova. . . .I am the Right Hand of Vengence. . .I am Death Incarnate, and the last living thing that you are ever going to see. God sent me."

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