Silver Tongue by William Roberts

I liked this. The scene is set up well and the character development is great. I will say that it felt like a scene from a larger story though. I wanted to see how Lealand got to Lord Kinston's court and what adventures he and Arya had after leaving the tavern. Overall, the piece left me wanting more which is good in that I'm hooked enough to be interested, but ultimately unsatisfying.

Thank you Kate. I have the next few sections of Silver Tongue outlined. I just have to write them I had planned to run this as a serial piece. I'll jump back to this one after I finish drafting my space opera. The deadline is looming and I want to be done!