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Post July 08, 2018, 01:45:47 PM

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The characters in this story are extracted from a time travel novel that I wrote called 'Chronoscape.'
I have written a dozen stories about these people although they don't link up. I assume that each story is from a different timeline, so anything is possible.
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Post July 24, 2018, 12:12:58 PM

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I loved the feel and set up of the story. The only issue that I had was the transition from modern to past. I had that WTF just happened moment and had to backtrack.
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