Writers Parasite [Contains Adult Language & Situations]


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Post January 08, 2019, 09:41:09 PM

Re: Writers Parasite [Contains Adult Language & Situations]

You didn't think I saw that parasite?

"What? What are you talking about?"

Ha! I saw you fall on your ass while slithering along the icy road.

"Did not..."

Did so.

"Did not..."

Fine. But I saw you and it was funny. Also, inspiring.
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Icy Road

Not much snow, not much cold
Not much traction, not much frozen
Enough though, enough snow for compaction
Enough cold to keep some snow frozen
Enough traction to allow a trucks wheels to gain motion.

Not much of a hill, not too long
Not much traction, not much frozen
Oh oh...
Wheels spinning after getting a little bit up the hill...

Brakes!
Locked wheels sliding
Bang!
Resting securely with the ass end kissing the gatepost
Damn, gravity, ice, momentum
truly a bitch.

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Post January 09, 2019, 10:04:58 PM

Re: Writers Parasite [Contains Adult Language & Situations]

Asog til mo mo
finger
Guld yeta guld
finger
Spiralla non confsor
finger

As the day remembers
there among the Black Oak dust
with dog and man and woman

Stirring the level lines
Bending the bow
and releasing

Asog til om om
finger
Guld crossed glimmer
Spiralla non rosfnoc
finger

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Post January 10, 2019, 08:19:51 PM

Re: Writers Parasite [Contains Adult Language & Situations]

KILLING MACHINE

Fitted color, crimson emotions stirring deep the void
Trumpet to sound, drum to beat; vibrations reach
Banners of so many, so much, so the need

Sharpen sword never truly rusted
waited pierce feeling angers
such indeed

Old in know, know
Young know only to go
unborn in trepidation
dead laughing at the dance, carefree

Lances leveled, shields held firm
and so with whir and hum
the machine glows, thirsty for satisfaction
history always shows
a record with a scratched track...]
repeating
repeating
repeating
repeating
...

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Post January 11, 2019, 09:39:37 PM

Re: Writers Parasite [Contains Adult Language & Situations]

Grapes grow, rows and rows
savoring steep soil and people look with resemble of
smiles

Quick talkers, one and a bit more quiet two
a third,
silent

Spit on the dog and laugh
strike number one
Contain deceit at a name
strike number two

It is interesting to see the thin man
hiding boredom and age,
this strike number
three.

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Post January 12, 2019, 10:33:21 PM

Re: Writers Parasite [Contains Adult Language & Situations]

Yes, this world truly does indeed...

*

It could be so nice indeed
Ingredients all in a bowl
mixed together
mashed and stirred
heated to a boil
and then cooled

Earth, a great place to stop and devour
destroy and wreak havoc
with a little time left over
for lunch.

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Post January 13, 2019, 01:09:35 PM

Re: Writers Parasite [Contains Adult Language & Situations]

Locusts in Mecca, now that is some great fodder for writing inspiration.

Locusts in the 'Old' days were on par with plague and bad omens. Kinda like water turning to blood and boils on the skin.

Love the lore as for many reality is on both sides of the line.
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Chicken entrails
Casting of bones
Meditation
Smoke
Traditions

Don't step on a crack
Throw salt behind your back
Don't tempt the demons of sensation

WhY/?\
wHy not give it a try\?/

Who rules what and why is not in question as people think they decide
so let them!
Let them eat cake while starving
Let them be in control of the world they don't know
Let them breed like roaches
Let them sing, play, work, die
for
if
people could even come close to grasping the Reality living besides...
it would no longer be called Earth, or Mars, or Mercury...
rather
it would be what is living
inside...

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Post January 15, 2019, 10:37:40 PM

Re: Writers Parasite [Contains Adult Language & Situations]

In Tune

Layer upon layer; entwined by atoms, molecules, and time

Listen, can you hear the subtle sounds?
Not the obvious of tenure, bass; octave of trembelo and count
Listen again, as the fingers respond
Pushing the white, the black with leather straps to hammer and wire

Vibrations combined to hear, see, and feel
But no, that's no it, what then is there else to listen?

Carried through air, such distortions where light shows darkness and darkness bears shadow
On the wall even, the ceiling, the roof and what?

Listen, can you hear the subtle sounds?
The top, the middle, the bottom
layers?

Emotions
Feeling
Sensations

No tune can hide the truth even when played the loudest
No tune can prevent the truth even when played in the mind
silent

All around
Everywhere
even in the vacuum of space; the far side of the moon
the sounds are overwhelming
if one chooses
to listen.

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Post January 16, 2019, 10:23:56 AM

Re: Writers Parasite [Contains Adult Language & Situations]

Actress declares that her 'first abortion' at age 19 was 'my best one.' And the audience loves it.
Actress and outspoken abortion advocate Martha Plimpton (left) raises her arm triumphantly while telling an audience that she got her "first abortion" at age 19 from a Seattle Planned Parenthood and that it was her "best" abortion. (Image source: YouTube screenshot)

Oh man oh man oh man...

This world is just FILLED with inspiration

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Colliding fragments released from the heart of heat
Gravity
Comets
Asteroids
Soon...
Planets

Moons
Environment
Forests
Rain
River
Species

A busy budding process this Creation
Life?

No, not yet...
Ignorance
Confusion
Hate
Sickness

Genetics not yet close
Time to Pull the handle
Bring out the Black Hole
Suck it dry...
Earth?
Yep, time to abort another planet.
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