No Dogs Allowed by Victor Henry

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Post August 05, 2014, 08:39:00 PM

No Dogs Allowed by Victor Henry

Wonderful semi micro fiction. You hit all the major points in a condensed format. Good piece for its brevity.
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Post August 31, 2014, 01:55:58 AM

Re: No Dogs Allowed by Victor Henry

This could almost as easily be poetry as prose.

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Very short, pleasant to read (except for the stumbling over strange words). Glorious insults but not much of a story arc.
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