May 2019 Challenge - The results

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Post June 02, 2019, 07:30:40 AM

May 2019 Challenge - The results

At the end of May, we find:
First, with three votes: "Beltane Traditions" by Eddie Sullivan
Second, with two: "The Lost Traveller" by Jontrue
Third, with one vote: "Sweet Dreams" by Michele "BottomDweller" Dutcher
And tailgunner: "On the Yellow Day of Beltane..." by Sergio "ente per ente" Palumbo
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Post June 02, 2019, 02:34:43 PM

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Congrats, Eddie!

My apologies; I didn't make any notes this time. However, when I first read the prompt, I couldn't figure out how a story could be written about such an esoteric and obscure event. O me of little imagination!

I voted for "The Lost Traveller", but it was a close choice between that and "Beltane Traditions."
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Post June 03, 2019, 02:24:52 AM

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Congratulations to the winner,,eh :D
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Post June 07, 2019, 11:12:00 PM

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Woah. Was this the first, first place, Eddie? I remember at one point you were concerned about that but maybe that was a long time ago and I just zoned about it.

Regardless, congratulations. Seriously. If it is that elusive first, doubly so.
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Post June 10, 2019, 03:45:12 PM

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Congrats Eddie! It was an unusual topic, but I know I learned something about a British Isles tradition.
It was clever the way the magician would always be trapped because his nemesis/companion was immortal. Very clever indeed.
My vote went to Jon True because of its soulful longing for a home that he was separated from by time.
I thought Sergio's story of the cattle-herder was a little disjointed because of the alien's presence, but I could understand completely why the UFO travelers might believe the old man's life was barely worth extending, even for a few months. The final scene that would eventually play out, with the herder and the cattle being together aboard ship, is creepy indeed.
I wanted to build a world with my entry - something unusual and unexpected. I'll get the first place trophy next time. Thanks, Bottomdweller
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