November Flash Challenge - the Results

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Post December 04, 2018, 06:21:07 PM

Re: November Flash Challenge - the Results

Congrats, Michele! Excellent work!

I made some very brief notes:

Last Night in Cancun--Head-hopping in first paragraph.

The Tale of the Blue Raven-- ***** [that's five stars].

Taylor and the Sloth--Surprising trick, with explanation.

My Old Were-ferret Plush...--Too much explanation--info-dump. Weak resolution; kid with no immigration papers.

AC/DC--Were-sex change? Novel idea.
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Post December 04, 2018, 11:47:51 PM

Re: November Flash Challenge - the Results

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