First World Problem Blues by Iain Muir


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Post June 04, 2017, 09:31:35 PM

First World Problem Blues by Iain Muir

Oh man, had to pinch myself... TWO fun poems this month.

RT's poem was a good punch to the funny bone and this one was read while listening to Mad Mary play her banjo.

I enjoyed the 'twang' of the words. They flowed like music.

Good job.
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Post June 06, 2017, 06:20:13 AM

Re: First World Problem Blues by Iain Muir

I thank you, Mr Lipinski.
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Post June 07, 2017, 11:46:20 PM

Re: First World Problem Blues by Iain Muir

This song just spawns new verses, alla the time...
That second line's a stone cold bitch, to get it ta rhyme
I got the shit-that-doesn't-scan-right
First World Problem Blues!
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