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In Hot Water by Esselman
As always, Walter, I'm a fan. I love the way you end and begin with SOS -- the adorably charming otter -- but the story isn't all fluff and cuteness; there's danger and daring and adventure, and they never even leave the canal.
I find your descriptions vivid; your action and plot well-paced; and your tone delightful.
I find your descriptions vivid; your action and plot well-paced; and your tone delightful.