Speaker to Animals by Phil Temples

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Post October 09, 2016, 06:21:06 PM

Speaker to Animals by Phil Temples

I just don't see the word "grok" enough.

The story has a strong, enjoyable voice, and it's a fun take on "first contact." Jesse's unique telepathy was a nice touch.

But really I just love that Phil used the word "grok."

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Post October 10, 2016, 08:43:53 AM

Re: Speaker to Animals by Phil Temples

An interesting story that borders on Flash Fiction, somewhat. I like the writing and its clarity. Stories that are easy to follow like this one usually captives the readers attention, and this story did that.

The description was good the character development good and the sensory input worked.

A nice short story that was enjoyable to read!

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