"Cosmic Chatter" by by Robin B. Lipinski


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Post June 12, 2015, 12:03:43 PM

"Cosmic Chatter" by by Robin B. Lipinski

I wonder:
Is it the author misinterpreting the term 'Heat Death of the Universe" ?
Or ist it me misinterpreting the poem?

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Post June 12, 2015, 07:53:27 PM

Re: "Cosmic Chatter" by by Robin B. Lipinski

the more humans think they understand, and communicate that understanding, the less it truly is understood...

thanks for reading the global understanding vates, it's a Universal thing.
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Love your enemy (while slicing open their bowels)
Making love (for $50 fellatio with a prostitute is a wonderful thing)
"I love you," (until the divorce if final and I get the house and car keys)
Jesus loves you, (there is no god, gods, and who are you to tell me?)
Hot love (cold passion)
Global warming (power and money in carbon credits, profitable indeed!)
Republicans are lovely (assholes)
Democrats are lovely (dicks)
...
i love Robin's writing (it sucks, he sucks, this writing is strange)
What does love mean, what does anything mean?
Humans are capable of good and evil and for some
both mean the same...
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Post June 14, 2015, 08:20:25 AM

Re: "Cosmic Chatter" by by Robin B. Lipinski

This!

Lipinski wrote:Humans are capable of good and evil and for some
both mean the same...



From the poem:
Anti-matter, dark matter, to balance 'things'

when I saw 'things' my mind replaced it with spooky strings

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Post June 15, 2015, 01:48:56 AM

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Spooky Strings
(the first words that come to my mind, as such the following)

Lunar influence on her and her parts
Flowing corporeal with what is real
this time of month again.

Mood of madder or glad with failure
success so often spurned
Sealed in blood
or soiled.

Her smile so real and yet open to horror
to hear her scream and pounding strength
so too, the alluring tempt as the tempo 'dick'tates.

I know, I've been there to clean up the mess.
The wailing and gnashing of teeth to offset all that earlier twerking
That time of month again so well known
the woman's curse.
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Post June 18, 2015, 11:24:59 PM

Re: "Cosmic Chatter" by by Robin B. Lipinski

Just keep taking the tablets, Robin :)
KNEEL before Zod!

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Post June 19, 2015, 08:24:19 PM

Re: "Cosmic Chatter" by by Robin B. Lipinski

so much inspiration, thanks, i do love the opportunities. to choose from the tablets of Ten Commandments or pills...
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Wired

Cocaine and meth
mixed with oxy and morphine

added to the mix:
the high of caffeine with the mellow of weed
and those are just the obvious -
add in the prescriptions of aspirin, lisonopril, with so many more to name,
along with diet soda, wonder bread and processed cheese...

Hell, lets just cut to the chase
end all the pain
make it short and sweet;
drink gasoline
snort a little strychnine
maybe even diddle an electric outlet with what is a man thing...
in the end it is all the same
cuz folks this ain't a rehearsal and the smorgasbord of death is wonderful
in this cosmic game.

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