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May 07, 2014, 12:15:10 AM
Dashes and Dots by Ed Sullivan
An entertaining fish story. I liked the intelligent villains.
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Dashes and Dots by Ed Sullivan
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May 07, 2014, 07:51:05 AM
Re: Dashes and Dots by Ed Sullivan
LOL. I guess it is a fish story isn't it? Love it!
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May 13, 2014, 10:26:17 AM
Re: Dashes and Dots by Ed Sullivan
This was good and a very interesting take, in fact as I think about it, it was better than good and totally unexpected.
Congratulations and a Flash well told, hook the reader, set the hook deeper into his or her brains and then leave them stranded wanting more.
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Congratulations and a Flash well told, hook the reader, set the hook deeper into his or her brains and then leave them stranded wanting more.
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May 13, 2014, 11:10:20 AM
Re: Dashes and Dots by Ed Sullivan
Thanks you're a chum!
Remember: when people tell you something’s wrong or doesn’t work for them, they are almost always right. When they tell you exactly what they think is wrong and how to fix it, they are almost always wrong. – Neil Gaiman
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May 13, 2014, 12:43:19 PM
Re: Dashes and Dots by Ed Sullivan
I have you hooked in a pun war! I am truly a master baiter!
Remember: when people tell you something’s wrong or doesn’t work for them, they are almost always right. When they tell you exactly what they think is wrong and how to fix it, they are almost always wrong. – Neil Gaiman
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May 13, 2014, 01:00:43 PM
Re: Dashes and Dots by Ed Sullivan
There are a number of jokes re going blind but they never made sense to me.
later friend.
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later friend.
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