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thirty three year-old slim, dark haired and hazel-eyed Susan Grant, M.D. said.
Thirty-four year old subatomic particle physicist Adrian Maas
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Lester Curtis wrote:I thought this whole story was in just too much of a hurry to get finished. Examples:
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I think Gino's stories would benefit if he slowed them down some. Let the readers catch their breath.
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