Growth Is Pain by Alex Dodo Niculae


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Post June 07, 2012, 08:31:24 AM

Growth Is Pain by Alex Dodo Niculae

Nice little entry in Iambic Pentameter.

Meanwhile, I'll see your verse as follows:

"I looked (at) the eyes, so cold so still
In which all life was gone. Until
You came along on wisps of night
“There is no need to feel such fright”"

And raise you the matching news story:

http://zeenews.india.com/news/world/dea ... 80360.html
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Post June 07, 2012, 11:44:17 AM

Re: Growth Is Pain by Alex Dodo Niculae

TaoPhoenix wrote:Nice little entry in Iambic Pentameter.

Meanwhile, I'll see your verse as follows:

"I looked (at) the eyes, so cold so still
In which all life was gone. Until
You came along on wisps of night
“There is no need to feel such fright”"

And raise you the matching news story:

http://zeenews.india.com/news/world/dea ... 80360.html

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