Interstellar Real Estate Agency by Thomas Reynolds


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Post January 28, 2012, 10:36:38 AM

Interstellar Real Estate Agency by Thomas Reynolds

This poem could definately be a long story short for a visit to the Mare Inebrium. As for the poem itself, it's difficult to read because of the format, and it would be nice if it rhymed...but it's a good idea for a story, no matter.
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Post January 28, 2012, 10:41:08 AM

Re: Interstellar Real Estate Agency by Thomas Reynolds

Honestly, I'm not sure this is a poem...I'll just say it, boom. Richard writes excellent star poetry and Fey (obviously), but this is more of a synopsis of a story than a poem. I think a poem should hit you in the gut. However, it is fun to think of some being out there looking to switch places with us. Come on 8) over to Sol-3, we have cookies. 8)
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