Junkyard Haze by Mike Phillips


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Post January 02, 2012, 01:02:27 AM

Junkyard Haze by Mike Phillips

Light-hearted fun. Environmental irresponsibility. Guy-talk. Beer. Weed. Pizza.

Sorry, guys, but those forklifts will be coming out of your pay . . .
I was raised by humans. What's your excuse?

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Post January 07, 2012, 09:01:24 PM

Re: Junkyard Haze by Mike Phillips

Cute, but I have to say I didn't like the pacing.

It spent half the story on "warmup talk", suited more for a 7 page story, then only some 8 paragraphs to make a magic monster out of nowhere. The end.

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