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Fighting For No One by Francis Bass

PostPosted: July 21, 2011, 10:36:32 PM
by Lester Curtis
This is rather interesting and quite different from what I expect in such a tale . . . you never see the final battle, nor get to know if the new arrivals are even Good Guys or not -- it's all about the main character's dilemma in trying to motivate the increasingly demotivated troops under him.

It almost seems unfinished, or like it should be part of a larger work.

Quite well done, though.

Re: Fighting For No One by Francis Bass

PostPosted: July 31, 2011, 08:35:06 AM
by FrancisBass
Thanks! I definitely keep the idea of expanding this world in the back of my mind, so there's a possibility that I will make this part of a larger work.