Casino by Michele Dutcher


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Post March 04, 2011, 05:06:18 PM

Casino by Michele Dutcher

Congratulations Michele Dutcher on your brillant sci-fi tale which takes place inside a casino. Once again your masterful use of the whimsical, Bewildering and the weird has led to a triumph in wascally witing. Great job! Please write more Amazing stories for the sake of all dudes and dudettes galaxywide!
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Post March 04, 2011, 07:08:46 PM

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bottomdweller wrote:Congratulations Michele Dutcher on your brillant sci-fi tale which takes place inside a casino. Once again your masterful use of the whimsical, Bewildering and the weird has led to a triumph in wascally witing. Great job! Please write more Amazing stories for the sake of all dudes and dudettes galaxywide!


Wow! Apparently Michele has been taking the correspondence course from the Charlie Sheen School of Bi-winnerism! Then again, I'm not sure what 'witing' is. Something to do with cosmetic dentistry?
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Post March 06, 2011, 02:39:51 PM

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The clue is the word right before it: wascally. Vague reference to archaic cartoon chartoon character who played nemisis to THE wascally wabbit who wouldn't write, rather he would wite wascally whimsical tales of the weird and wonderful (as does Michele Dutcher).
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Post March 06, 2011, 02:50:43 PM

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Great story, great setting. A nice use of facts associated with aliens and UFOs. I liked the story; it was entertaining from start to finish, and character development excellent----all characters came alive to me as I read.

I really can’t nit-pick with any parts of the story, and I can’t see how any changes would improve it. She balances out all the techniques needed in story telling, and that is an art in itself. Nice sentence structure, varied sentence lengths, good word choices, and believable dialogue.

Good one!!!

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Post March 06, 2011, 04:42:04 PM

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They would be playing 'ALIEN' - where the bonus game is walking into a roomful of pods, you get to choose them (credits come out) until one opens up and a baby Alien pops out.
How much did they win? - come on now, even I can't go that far out, and I write fiction.
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Post March 08, 2011, 03:25:52 AM

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For Bottomdweller:

Great story! :D The idea is really good, I liked it and the whole tale indeed...aliens in disguise...or better, forcing the others to look at them as animals or whastsover harmless around the Casino...all that was smart!!!Moreover, with compliments for your many stories online this month...eh,eh :D
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Post March 08, 2011, 11:54:31 AM

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Thanks for the high praise, but honestly, is noone going to say anything about the footnotes at the bottom of the story?
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Post March 08, 2011, 12:36:16 PM

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The question isn't if we believe that aliens exist, but whether the aliens believe that we are worth existing...eh,eh :lol: :lol: :mrgreen:
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Post March 15, 2011, 03:01:08 PM

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bottomdweller wrote:Thanks for the high praise, but honestly, is noone going to say anything about the footnotes at the bottom of the story?


You really want me to say something about it, Michele?

Somehow, I think not. But since you asked. . .

I'm not sure these things didn't happen, but when you say "Actual Event," it means it actually happened. Possibly what you meant to say was 'Based on an actual claim.'

I'm afraid that the little grey guys are going to have to walk-up, introduce themselves and then bite me on the patootie before I give such claims much credence. I liked the story much better as fiction. Your end notes turned the story into something else, entirely.

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Post March 15, 2011, 03:21:03 PM

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I'm afraid that the little grey guys are going to have to walk-up, introduce themselves and then bite me on the patootie before I give such claims much credence.

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Post March 15, 2011, 03:45:10 PM

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Dearest Bill_Wolfe, THAT's what makes it so much fun! - It's the X-files meets the Blair Witch Project. I love it!
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Post March 16, 2011, 09:28:25 AM

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Lester Curtis wrote:Be careful your own self, Bill -- they might be venomous!


Lester,

The down side of an alien invasion is that being from a completely different evolutionary line, the chances are that no matter what. . .

We can't eat 'em.

Pity, really. I bet they don't taste like chicken.

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Post March 16, 2011, 10:22:36 AM

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We can't eat 'em.


No problem, we can't even beat them, too...eh,eh :D
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Post March 16, 2011, 11:41:48 AM

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We can't eat 'em.

Pity, really. I bet they don't taste like chicken.
If they can breathe our air, there's a good chance we could eat 'em . . . even if they're toxic, we could let the Japanese sushi chefs have a go at it -- they figured out how to handle fugu, after all . . .
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