Car Park by Mark E. Cotterill


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Post December 28, 2010, 10:53:16 PM

Car Park by Mark E. Cotterill

Te best I can say for this one is that the plot was inscrutable. I don't read mysteries, but this might have been a good one.

Characterization . . . machine-like, for the main character at least, which, while appropriate, was boring. For the people -- well, you just can't really know.

Pretty unexciting overall. Maybe it could be spiced up some, but I'm not sure how.
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Post January 05, 2011, 07:04:20 PM

Our cars do say a lot about ourselves, don't they? I appreciated the programmed main character... It's not as easy to pull of as you might think.
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