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Be Then What You Be

PostPosted: November 19, 2009, 10:59:31 AM
by rick tornello
A lovely story. I really like these things. The words made great pictures in my mind.


Re: Be Then What You Be

PostPosted: November 20, 2009, 06:28:00 PM
by Bill_Wolfe
There were some lovely turns-of-phrase in this story. The writing is quite unlike anything I have ever encountered.

Very fairytaleish (if it isn't a word, it should be.)

There are a few punctuation and spelling errors that a little more proofing would find, but it only distracts a little.

But I truly enjoyed this piece, and would like to see more.

Haven't followed the link to other works, yet. I'm still working on this issue.

Great story, and very well done.

Bill Wolfe