Post January 17, 2007, 02:25:07 AM

The Turks by Derek Davis

very interesting steampunk premise and a unique angle with the turks invading north america. you couldn't tell whether it was the 15th fast forwarded, or the 21st on slow-mo! in fact, you couldn't tell much of anything about the backstory, which pretty much how i like. nothing like intrigue and mystery in a short, and The Turks had those.

wished for more interaction between Lucy and the soldier, or at least some more info on the size of her breasts...

wit was another plus here, and overall i'd say the story was written with confidence and thorough consideration.

was this inspired by the last segment in the anime Memories, by the way?