Sci-Faiku by William Landis


Tell us what you thought about the April 2009 issue!

Editor Emeritus

Posts: 2528

Joined: December 31, 1969, 08:00:00 PM

Location: Mass, USA

Post April 09, 2009, 09:55:11 PM

Sci-Faiku by William Landis

It takes a lot to surprise me for a Haiku - normally I'm a High Word Count fan. (You know, I'm the critter that reads the comparative introductions appended to new editions of books.) Let's see why.

First line - starts me thinking of some midwest farm.
Second line - early to rise, way of the farm, all that jazz.

Nothing special yet.

Third Line - "while the _____ sets" ... La la how sweet, ...wait, WHAT?

While the *earth* sets... Uh oh.
"Dammit, now I have to WORK. Lessee..."

What little I know of astronomy feebly informs me that while Mars is visible to us, it takes a bit of work to see, and isn't usually Tractor Gazing fodder. So I don't think this is a Mars base - it's Luna 1 or such.

Barring some truly extravagant tech, the Moon can't be terraformed proper. Okay, Fella On'na Tractor is probably under one of those domes (or tunnels with a MirrorSky system.) ... And so it goes.

I churned through an entire book of Japanese death-poem Haiku with only a couple entries that were this much fun. Bravo.
User avatar

Senior Critic

Posts: 316

Joined: December 31, 1969, 08:00:00 PM

Location: Upstate New York

Post April 10, 2009, 01:22:26 AM

Or cargo tractor on Moon Base Alpha, perhaps?

Or maybe a laser cannon prime mover on an asteroid settled into distant Earth orbit to act as a space marine forward base. Marines can be early risers, too.

Lots of possibilities with this one.
"I'm going to do what the warriors of old did. I'm going to recite poetry!"

Return to April 2009

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 1 guest

cron
Powered by phpBB © 2000, 2002, 2005, 2007 phpBB Group.
Designed by STSoftware.