Post November 06, 2008, 01:17:44 PM

Desert Motel

This story was not what I expected - which was a pleasant surprise indeed. Around the middle of the story, it took a whole different turn and became a lot of fun. I'm not sure at all that I've ever read a story where humans fight back - how cool is that.

It was well written...the first may have been shortened some to get to the crux of the matter, but it was worth it to get to the 2nd half of the story.

My only critism is that the captors don't really have watermelon shaped heads, they're triangular in shape and as thin as the rest of their bodies. That whole big-skull Egypt thing is a diversion away from THE TRUTH! Also, the small ones usually handle all of the actual dirty work. Believe me, I know! I want to believe!