Writers Parasite [Contains Adult Language & Situations]


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Post September 05, 2020, 12:05:53 AM

Re: Writers Parasite [Contains Adult Language & Situations]

Bubbles

Written by: Boiling waters of life

At first, a bubble.
Tiny from the bottom released
Bobbing its way towards a surface of freedom

It was narrow
Focused
Interesting
and over...

Soon replaced by more
and more
and more
until the waters boiled

So many stories
So many words
So many lives...

Not the power of countries
nor techno giants as Google and Twitter
Tik Toc
Amazon
Politicians
No, it is
the people...

Bubbles and more bubbles and more and more and more
until there is never enough time to say it all
as the minds yell and are let in
when a small part of mind
is open...

As such, forever the inspiration.
***

Peace

For a tired and worn moment
Where clothes are dirty, even tattered
Striving to survive in a world where the small aspects of hate and evil
exist
dominate
ferment
grow...

Where in a world hate and evil; pride of self and striving for control over others
Yelling and raised fists...

Their mothers and fathers are happy as once they too were small aspects of hate and evil
Going about their lives complaining
striving for what matters
but only if you believe like them...

Does peace exist?
Can it ever?
For a tired and worn moment
Where clothes are dirty, even tattered
Striving to survive in a world where the small aspects of hate and evil
exist
To sew the torn holes with thread and care
To cleanse away the dirt and dread
Fill a belly with loving food
Pet the dogs
Love the children
and pretend it all can get better...

Finally, to gain sleep after prayer
knowing only God can provide peace
and never, ever,
this world filled with torn and tattered
humans.

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Post September 05, 2020, 11:29:24 PM

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People have friends. They have someone of whom they have something in common. That is inspirational and admirable for them.

For me, I have a great friend. It is called, Wind. And to this blows much inspiration and, thanks...
***

As long as the people have ground out of life, their bodies are ground to dust

Ashes blowing in the winds whim as much as when a newborn expels the breath within

All bents of situations presented: A gazelle racing from the claws of a lion, faster than a breeze

A tree bending with will of a blowing persuasion

Avian intent seemingly free with the backing of seasonal trades

After and before there is, preparation

Ambling or chance when really alive and knowing

Always there

Always present

And with a song joining, to spread the arms wide and enjoy the embrace of my friend, the Wind.

Thanks.

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Post September 06, 2020, 11:41:18 AM

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So, how does 'life' on other planets/worlds/dimensions deal?

Huymins write 'fiction' about such. Putting the human element into the thread of the story complete with what is applicable according to earth science. Very much enjoyable. Like watching a two-year old try to understand quantum physics which is like... try... HA!

War. Love. Hate. Emotions. Sex. Reproduction. Science. Literature. Religion.

What fun. To be able to mix and mingle with the species which can imagine, even understand yet never know...

Huymins of levels seen since way before Christ appeared have played a game without realizing they too, are a part of a 'game'.

People on this planet live as they lead themselves to believe and think. Consumption of food materials to nourish a body, dreams to guide emotions, chemicals to drive reproduction.

Chess.

Checkmate

But what if there were no board, no players, nothing... Would the game still exist and the answer is a robust and hearty, YES!

To travel.
To wake.
To be.
It is
a
great day to move as a shock wave throughout what is 'today' a very important bringing together of a over a trillion years of planning.

"You're fucking weird Robin..."

Thanks parasite. Ya ready for what is about to happen?

"Go fuck yourself. I'm gonna go take a nap."

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Post September 08, 2020, 10:48:49 AM

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An Italian shaman who lived in a home with bats
Shit on the ground with water deep in the ground
a person can't make this stuff up

A roof tired and in need
Water a trough for guidance
Paint and German dogs

Getting power from the sun
while in the new fridge it all rots
and what a piss-poor road

Passing it all
and in all
laughing as laughter is best
though
fish sticks and bacon?
Yum!

Okay
You both have a new home
The shaman is gone
the bats are relieved
and i get a job just for fun.

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Post September 10, 2020, 10:41:02 AM

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Chariots led with unbridled wind
Rebellion
Stubborn strength from where it protects

Test
Just test what is
It is...
terror
horror
so much death

Shaking the head to clear the clouds
Shaking the tail to clear the lands
And in the end, a new World

(so many vibrations and colors, better to lock the hand)

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Post September 11, 2020, 11:25:23 PM

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Formulate. Speculate. Hypothesis. Factual. Spiritual. Educational. Or in other words... total Bullshit...

Was in a discussion with a medical doctor today regarding how in my opinion female human doctors are more compassionate than male human doctors.

He told me I was full of shit and that male human doctors are more compassionate.

Inspirational. On the anniversary of some goat humping terrorists who decided to kill some Americans... would it have made any difference if the goat humpers were female or male? The answer: No. All humans can be excellent goat humpers.
)))

God's Humor

To joke with God is the ultimate form of laughter

Tried it again and found it inspirational

It is...

Always...

in the punchline and indeed it is...

a gut buster albeit filled with sublime.

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Post September 12, 2020, 08:54:27 PM

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"Cough. Cough. Gag. Cough..."

What's wrong parasite?

"The smoke... Whole damn country is on fire what with riots and burning trees. Lets pick up and move to Greenland. Whattia say?"

No. It will burn there also. This world needs to burn. The moon needs to crumble. Icarus needs his wings melted. And in this the irony of the continuing saga of Humor...

Inspirational though.
***

(the memory today was strong. glad to see fresh paint of orange to strike contrast between trespass, dust, and melted wings)

As the mind expanded the wings unfurled
Taking flight to test the breeze
High
Higher
Until the very heavens themselves became far below

So much it became lost inside
A fool to some, arrogant to others
a battle between strong and weak

Yet still the wings beat as if one could ever surmount the dream
The dream, always the dream
Even higher now until with Humor, put into place

Sun to melt the wax and feathers
Age to melt the skin and mind
Until...
Falling
Falling for what seems like an eternity
Crashing back to reality

Though God is kind and benevolent
Leaving me with the body of a young boy
A dog by the side
Jar of grasshoppers and a fishing pole
Walking beside crystal clear waters of a stream filled with uncountable trout
Smile on the face feeling the warmth of the Sun's smile
Such a peaceful and simple dream.

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Post September 13, 2020, 10:01:06 PM

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"Your imperfection is your perfection" A quote from a bald man talking to another bald man. Both men of different colors. Guess who was the one talking...

***
Condensation

Not concentration

Nor condoned

...

Maybe it could be, consternation?

No?

Condemn!

What talk of black and white where one listens while one talks...

Racial dialogue; war of worlds; master when slave holds title or slave when becoming the master...

Meaningless as such a word of condensation when really it is...
connive
convince
leaving nothing to the reality of concern,
awash in political soothing of past actions of bald men filled with ambitions.

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Post September 15, 2020, 09:26:51 PM

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For four, or is it?
More?

Look here while there
a blink.

First a bit of foreplay
a tingle

Aha!
AAAaaaahhhhh...

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Post September 16, 2020, 10:50:11 PM

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Time is irrelevant. It really... is
Look at ol Willy Shakespeare. He doodled his writing and it is as bad today as it was back when he wrote it.

Look at what cave people doodled on the cave walls. It is as fresh today in content as it was the day they painted it.

A couple of hundred years ago some people got together and wrote a Constitution for a Republic. Seems like only yesterday. Same Constitution but now different meanings for those who in themselves, write...

Time is irrelevant for what is written BUT time is as fragile and slippery as melting ice on a hot metal slide at your nearest grade school regarding the meaning of writing.

"Those are illegal."

What? Melting ice?

"No numbnuts, metal slides at gradeschools are gone unless the school is located in some backwoods, redneck, cabin school. No swing sets, teeter totters, merry go rounds. No dodge ball. No toy guns. Nothing is legal at gradeschools anymore except..."

Yeah. Yeah. I know parasite. Which just proves time is irrelevant just as human customs and morals could no more be etched in stone and might as well be melting ice on a hot metal slide located in a junk yard.

"I know what you're feeling tonight and it gives me the tingles. Can I help you write what inspires you tonight?"

Go for it parasite. Write a song.
***

The Moons

Break it up
Break it up
Break up the Moon oo oo oon...

Break it up
Tear it up
Smash it up
Break up the Moo oo oo oon...

Wake up
Wake up
Time to play the game

Break it up
Tear it up
Smash it to smithereens!

Let the blackness unfold
The dust fall where it may
And in its place, three new Moons
to keep humanity in its place.

(awkward silence)

"How was that shit head?"

Uhm... I was thinking about nipples and chocolate ice cream. That's my inspiration for tonight. But hey, whatever floats your boat. Break it up. Tear it up. Smash it to smithereens sounds like what a two-year old does to his mothers favorite butter boat or a riot monger shopping in Portland. What made you think of the moon?

"I'm gonna eat it."

(eye rolling and a sigh)

Okey dokey. No more cookies for you..

"Fuck your cookies and fuck the Moon. I'm gonna 'change' it." Hee he he...

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Post September 17, 2020, 11:06:27 PM

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Ghosts in Gettysburg, now that is inspiring. Much better than politics and living people. Ghosts are fun!
***

Boo!

Did you know...
You can fuck a ghost
well, not really
a ghost though
can fuck you...

What's with death and sex?
Highly overated to the point of XXX
G is what it should be
G for general consumption
such as Casper the friendly ghost
or those imps at Gettysburg

Amazing in fact
how humans can think about fucking
even if the topic is ghosts, ladies wearing red hats, or the specific gravity of lead.

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Post September 18, 2020, 07:42:22 PM

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A language is a great mechanism to test the society using such.
A language is an excellent way to judge the collective intelligence.

So many words, are like, you know, uhm... used until it, are like, are like, and soon, it is out there for all to see.

I wrote earlier about being called out on using the word, that. So many think a word is overused, should never be used, or used more often.

Some writing is very simple and easy.
Some writing is so simple and easy to understand it just makes it all so more wonderful when peeling back the multiple and more complex stories that 'that' jump out.
***

There is no concept of time
There is no mortal index
There is nothing that can break something so fragile

There is comfort of knowledge
There is the painful reminders at just how worlds strive to become so complex they become simple and real
There is no such word as soon, or maybe, or if...

It is
It will always and forever remain specia
Gods smile.

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Post September 19, 2020, 11:44:30 PM

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Don't try this at home.

"Try what numbnuts? Try your cooking?"

No. Yes. I mean,yes to not trying my cooking and, and, and why the hell am I talking to you? You're a parasite and my slave...

'"Slave? HaHaHa Bwhaahaa...HeeHee (snort, gurgle, gag) Slave! Oh my, now that's [i] some funny shit."

I'm going to ignore you now parasite. Go amuse yourself

"HaHaHa. Slave! Oh damn... (blowing snot and some form of purple mucus the parasite floated away in a cloud of laughter)
***
Pin the Tail

There exists layer upon layer
One layer shows the obvious, the reality, the rest

Looks shows the obvious
But smells and vibrations; sublime, subtle, the reality, the rest

Her shirt was tell of the tale
His the smile

The smell of sex
The taste of soup
and laughter better than the mead...

It does not begin or end there as it was so easy to release the birds flocking inside the mind
They went here
and there
and some continued while some returned

And humans worry about political names such as Biden or Trump?
Dead judges?
A virus?
Money?
Self?
Job?
Love?
Hate?
Life?

Imagine walking down a path covered in glass
Music endless
and
Peace...

It is not at your home
nor his
or hers
it is
[i]my
world...
and so very, very, very hard
to let others in.

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Post September 20, 2020, 08:54:43 PM

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Fits five... wanna think?
The land of the Maj where grasps a marriage of the moons mirage
Age of...un? No. No battle... yet

Nor torium: Ah yes
Nor, at this nor ever would it be... a request
Morium: Lingistic; Mind

There is a point to the point,
pointed on many fronts
To exact with precision...

Ha! It is good
Feeling strangely...
yes, a bit strange,
inside...

And somehow
with a shadow of moons
Turkey... ah, the aroma
You
see.

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Post September 21, 2020, 10:32:11 AM

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It is here today
it can appear gone tomorrow
it is not an illusion
rather
a game

China in space with grand desires as they fill the sky with planes
and the ground with tanks

Republican and life
life and Democrat
Love and Hate
Kill a baby?
Save a baby?
Why wait?

You can write forever
Let an entire planet know what is
what was
what will be
and then bury it all, until forever
or until the A.I. decides
humans were a mistake

Aphelion and bots
or people with a lot at stake
watching the fires burn at their feet
feeling the heat
.
and there, off in the distance, a band gathered today in meeting
a place where there is no writing, no records, no history, no ice, no flame...

it is
a - place where dragons greet
where the ground shakes
a - place of fairie song, of Unicorns, of a very special magik
released...

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Post September 25, 2020, 01:45:36 AM

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The Meal

i tried to nibble at love;
devoured a large portion of hate;
gorged on the mundane;
guzzled a large cup of scorn;
sipped a small glass education;
chomped with zest a complete buffet of humor;
felt the bubbles in the bottle of sex;
tasted the bitter flakes of a world;

so much to eat, taste and try

with good and evil inside, both wearing a bib so very much
oversized
spilling so much on the table...

and in the end
i discovered
the shit does not matter.

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Post September 26, 2020, 01:48:39 AM

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argghh!

"sounds like a pirate."

No parasite. Arrr, sounds like a pirate. Argghh, is a sound one makes when constipated or doing yearly taxes.

"you're still a fucking moron. but you have cheese doodles so i can tolerate you a bit longer."

Some inspiration today. Rice and potatoes cooked in a Persian recipe style.

"whatever."
(*

Kachor

Hers was the misted eyes of lost dreams
His the path towards an oasis
Theirs the world of days splitting days, the wear of sandals given

Drums once covered in a hide of confidence; beating a challenge to those who could hear
but those bearing the beater... would they too learn to listen?

Armories rich with the tradesmen skill.
Forged metal to penetrate consciousness
Shielding nothing or no one from desires

In the desert of sands solid in flight
where reality seems, though not truly, hidden

Hers the smile lost in the storm
His the belief he is strong

Together allied with a world so lost to ambitions
leaving a camel to walk alone
as the body of a scorpion feeds the ants.
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