Writers Parasite [Contains Adult Language & Situations]


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Post September 04, 2019, 06:24:11 PM

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[color=#000000]phases...
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belly empty, body comfortable
enjoying the sun's heat
and yet feeling another change
subtle yet in the face
full force more so than gale
colder than liquid nitrogen
hotter than molten fusion of Stragrit
left with a hunger so huge it consumes ones tail
rightly so
this small skull of soaked sheets wrapping a shell...
so it is
so it shall be
blinkblinkblink
the Comet speaks
while crickets laugh with snakes
and wasps befriend the snails...
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Post September 05, 2019, 08:58:25 PM

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Painting a Picture

By: Neurons

The field is flat; laser level flat
{polished} and yet one holds their hands out for balance
beneath the flowing hardness of clear show the mountains below.

90 degree angle to the flame as narrow as a pencil, reaching up and far past the moon
with subtle degree's of changing colors
and emitting music.

The field is divided in half.
One half covered with small intense black blocks with no shadow
One half covered with what does not touch... floating white balls
In the middle each side trades colors.

This picture is alive with endless snapshots to provide clarity
and watching it, the mind brings
wonderful change.

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Post September 06, 2019, 11:38:28 PM

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Kung Fu Panda 3
half a moon
lightning
rain
digging rock an dirt
soup
cheese
pizza sticks
ice cream
jalepeno poppers...
can a Friday get any better than this?
what's that, Marabou chocolate?
the answer is obvious...
Nope, it can't.

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Post September 08, 2019, 12:39:44 PM

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War is nothing... if not... inspiring...
***

Warriors Prayer

Formed by the heat of planets formed
Intense grinding feelings of gravity to hone emotions
Forging steel and mind

Mothers hand to raise innocence with violence hidden
Father killed by tribal traditions
Growing stead to take the stance

Territory
Religion
Governments...
Excuses all for those moments golden

The tools of armor, steel, poison, machine, bullets, sword, lance, shield...
Merely an extension used for what is not needed
as in my hands exist the power to kill to fill
the need

Bring me war!
I pray to make my enemy deceased
To ravage home, village, country, world
in front of God I spit my justifications...
and why?
The answer always worshiped...
to bring the peace
while inside knowing
it is to obey the whims of the Beast
and in this it is
to be human.

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Post September 10, 2019, 10:01:01 AM

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Between the Papers

By: Sheets of a book

Numbers starting at birth to lead to the moment the hand first turns the cover

Was it the texture of the binding? The size of? The picture?

For some, it is in the name author, the subject, the title, the publisher

For some, it is random, an impulse, advertisement, school, referral

With higher class leaning to start with Roman numerals

Others basic start with 1 while the cheapest; none

but as in mankind's destiny, all are numbered.

*-.

Oh how the pages unfold, one atop the other, each vying for the eye of attention until the page is turned for another, and another, and then yet a blur until the hand closes the books leaving one to think of what was just read while waiting for the hand to once again, open another...

What was just read? Can you really believe you remember?

All those pictures in your head while feeling the papers texture?

Did you, could you, would you, find? Or is it really all, just words feeding a mind?

Books filled with paper printed with words, no matter how fine or expensive
or
Books filled with paper printed with words so few, so cheap, so inexpensive they are found in the trash and free...
they all fill a need for those trying to escape life while trying to learn life; ironic?

Papers are deceptive compared to children holding hands or an old man/woman sitting in a nursing home holding and stroking the fur
of a kitten...

There we have it. A conundrum of choice. To read of life and experience
or
to Live it.

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Post September 11, 2019, 10:24:47 PM

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Inspiration comes constantly. A bad day? Inspirational. A good day? Inspirational. Working with an excavator to find a leaking water pipe while being supervised by a four-year old boy? Definitely inspirational.

The four-year old asked a lot of questioned and so I asked him, "Can you count to ten?" His reply was, "What for?"

Good laugh out of that one.
***

Old people are mostly dour and set in ways to provide the least friction
Young people are mostly curious and open to any bit of confusion

Old people complain, demand, to get their way
Young people watch and learn of such ways

Old people take a lot of medicine
Young people take medicine and complain

Old people sleep a lot
Young people sleep a lot

Seems like a lot in common what with questions, life, and being
but
young people are much more fun to watch in such a hostile environment
this world is
today.

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Post September 12, 2019, 11:46:44 AM

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Voices

Given a brain, a biological computer
Input giving output
a voice comes to
mind

A song
words
whispers
mumbles
drunken stupor
impaired
intelligent
angry
hostile
loving
kind
...


now, try in silence to read the minds...

it is more than enough to hear the voices coming from so many worlds, let along the language
of
mankind
and yet,
sometimes it is worth the effort.

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Post September 12, 2019, 10:56:38 PM

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Up-Side-Down

Inspired by talking with a very swollen preying mantis walking with the sky as a floor... and very cranky.
***

Belly heavy with such thin legs trying a contrary stance
Red metal on top with bottom of white

Late Summer teasing with Fall
and still she walked with defiance

Loud in manners, so loud the news could be heard
for miles

So congratulations
It will be girl, a wonderful child
growing into a woman special

at least
that's what i
heard.

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Post September 13, 2019, 10:14:13 PM

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A sliver is even inspirational. Food is inspirational... How the hell can any writer say, "I have writers block..."

There is just too much to write and not enough time to write it all. And that is inspirational!
***

Scrabble

Little wood blocks with letters of the alphabet............a board............plastic pieces.......an opponent..........and then, the battle begins.

Ooq, is that a word? No? How about Qoo?

No, you can't do that

No

No

Yes..........Double word, triple word, can I add to that, IQs, can't that be plural?

Next time, lets play chess or checkers, scrabble has too many rules.

"Robin, that bit of writing sucks."

Thanks parasite. Wanna play scrabble?

"Ooq you..."

I knew it! Ooq you too.

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Post September 14, 2019, 11:20:22 PM

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Outside there balanced a moon atop a pine treed ridge
As full as an orange or pumpkin
without the seeds

On the road today, a covey of quail with some fully grown
and one little fella
small as only a small quail can be

There was digging and digging and digging
until the pile was huge
so then it was time to dig a hole for a septic tank

Greeted by three corgi's with attitude

Chips and dip
Lamb and potatoes
Of course, ice cream

It is mornings/days/evenings such as outside and inside
making the time pleasing
getting a good nights sleep for another day.
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Post September 15, 2019, 11:25:08 AM

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I was raised by humans. What's your excuse?

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Post September 15, 2019, 12:12:35 PM

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That made my morning Lester.

Corgi's are the coolest dogs in the world!

The newest one in this home is named, Sobo. She is a tri-color and oozes energy and raw power.

Thanks for the inspriation.
***

Dogs looking for their bones
and it's raining steely ice picks on your shore
Gonna break my rusty cage and run (thanks Johnny)

On the heels free of collar
with paws roaring thunder
leaving all panting
under the shade
it's a corgi Summer.

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Post September 17, 2019, 12:31:50 PM

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It was, as it is, a square planet

Roads paved with sheets of glass as far as a road could wind

Layer upon layer

entwined.

(insert picture with another internal movement of dimensions)''

(click personal coordinates set in memory to zero, zero, one)

It is, as it was, a round planet

upon the fractured panes rolled a rock of the smallest tolerances

Pulsating lobes shimmering on Pi

separating the shattered glass.

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Post September 19, 2019, 09:03:27 PM

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1.0333 f]

jagger placement

mark, mark, mark...

set. "We have contained breach by operatives."

Israel: Arab gains ignite conservative
Turkey: A big of a shakeup bit
Iran: Arsenal of desperation flowering

I.T.I.

Yes. All in all, smoothly done.

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Post September 20, 2019, 08:22:09 PM

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Dennis Rodman claims Madonna once offered him $20M to get her pregnant

Sex... That final frontier... Dare to go where no man has gone before...

The above headline is an example of 'click baiting'. Saw the words flash on the screen, sooo... what sane mind would pass up on such a topic?

Money.
Sex.
Together, such a fitting marriage.

Clicked on the link. Not a bad article if one takes out 99% or their brain.

Anyway. Inspirational and scary. The DNA alignment between Rodman and Madonna. It could be a brand new species!!!
***

Pay for one could get; paid
Lineage so old, so very old, it was the first job

Wiggled smile, alluring style
Such soft skin, supple mounds, simple

Then, with such thrusting...
such perspiration...

Ecstasy is thus
Payment...

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Post September 22, 2019, 12:37:58 PM

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"Nice ass shit head..."

Thanks parasite. Comes from working hard.

"So, ya gonna go naked all day?"

I want to but society has deemed that to be inappropriate.

"Fuck society!"

Totally agree. Totally. But... society is made up of drones lost in identity of the masses and not the individual, as such they control and dictate the laws of the land.

"Wow. Getting a bit deep for a naked idiot. Though, I've said that for years."

I think there would be less violence and war if clothing was banned. Just imagine every human naked. It would be real. The perceived ugliness and beauty mixed. All imperfections revealed. The dance of humanity would be fulfilled instead of the current travesty for the many past years.

"Huh? Now you're talking fucked up. But I'm inspired so I'm going to be naked all day!"

You're always naked parasite. And that's one of the reasons i enjoy your company. Now go frolic with some nekked dolphins...

"See ya!"
***

Writers write stories, this is nothing new. But do writers immerse themselves into their stories?

I think some do and some don't, but mostly I think most writers write stories fully clothed, the words they use nothing more than clothing to fit the deception.

It is refreshing to read what writers write while being fully naked and exposed to a world that would like nothing more than to devour their very soul. As such, inspiring.
***

in my world, a place exists free of the bindings of death
carried feet aloft in a world of storm and wind
raw energy revealed
feasts of sincerity
sated feelings
being alive
free
i

live to soar above the mundane and gravity
soaring with wings outstretched
filled with so much
gripping the threads
light and blackness
sparking
i

in my world there is no pretend
no lies to self or friend
songs, music, dance
naked for all to see
and in this
i
am
not alone
and free to roam and dream
eternal.

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Post September 23, 2019, 09:08:41 PM

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2 cute

2 dreams...

1 dream years ago while asleep
1 dream minutes ago while awake
both dreams exactly the same with color, smell, visual, and when a shimmer appears in unison with the bodies vibrations... intensely inspirational
***

. ..
.. .
... ... ...

Visual participant as if watching black and white moving pictures
come to this moment
alive

For most, the screen is snow and static
For some, the scene is overly dramatic
For four, it is

Alive with the ability to forget what happens only seconds ago
while
living thousands of instant dreams...

What is this screen so many call time?
So tangible, so strong, so fragile
And most importantly, with so much ability
why do those who know, try to turn the channel?

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Post September 24, 2019, 09:08:21 PM

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Inspired by a wall design to be incorporated in a new home being built.
Mundane is for those who cannot see boring
Logic is what keeps a machine turning
Dreams are what paint the scenes.
***

In such arrays there comes the right angles
With circular intensity, there are few
who can
escape.

Left and right
or
round about
without looking up
or
beneath
or
beside.

What is it, this residing, inside?
Outside?
Between directions which at once can be either way?

A needle points North, slave to the magnetic
yet this is not the home of Stones
nor South
East
or
West.

Again, up, beneath, beside
and here we are again
left and right at 90 degree angles
instead of playing into our hands
infinity...

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Post September 26, 2019, 02:45:16 AM

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Red Rope

Written by: A fish scale

Phallic or maybe, a bit of twisted tail
Womb a tomb, a catacomb of frozen whimsy
Short, a piece of ground line once used to hoist traps
or
maybe in the end
it is but a simple piece of dust rope.

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Post September 26, 2019, 11:06:10 PM

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An important day. Too much to write about with the whirlwind of words whipping a tempo.

In that split piece of eternity which occurs between the world of dreams the picture ripped from the fabric of the purple web of lightning covering a sky void of oxygen. Such color.

The Council voted and probably for the best and betterment though meaningless to me and holds no sway. This because the King of Spiders spun the membrane of the drum so thick, so deep, the reverberations will for long, rule the sky.

In Jim's and so many others, their eyes seeing a last breath.

Two were shown and yet chose to deny water and now they pay for the greed.

Seams so out of balance...and for what? Power? Self? Sad, sad, sad... indeed.

However, it all is as it is, and, of course inspirational.
***

In a transformation following one formation after another
rests worry
free
]
Such in hand and hand and handed
frivolity, meaning of ashes
understand
[
in the hearts of man resides a wanting
unfilled by passions and desires
stripping naked to the very soul
and yet,
no where
understood
]
how then can the Moon smile?
the Sun glow?
when
then
:
a belly satisfied, a good nights sleep,
and a smile.

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Post September 27, 2019, 11:01:43 PM

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One day like today it is t-shirt weather and then the weather forecast calls for rain/snow in a couple of days.

The weather is an accurate metaphor for how humans relate and communicate.

I wonder what a penguin would write or say, (well, they say a lot but the writing is hard when you can't hold a pencil)

Inspirational.
*

Fish

Written by: A fish

Fish, fish, fish
fish
fish
fish fish
fish
fish fish fish fish fish fish fish

(and in response by a wolf seal writing his first poem)

Penguin, penguin, penguin
penguin
penguin
penguin
penguin penguin
penguin penguin penguin

(and in response by a human after reading what a penguin and wolf seal would write)

I'm so special. My mommy said I'm the best. Look, I have a gold star on my birth certificate. My ways are better than you. Climate change is your fault.

(and in response by me after spending seconds wasted just thinking of this shit)

Where are the potato chips and dip? (or) Zzzzz Zzzzz Zzzzz...

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Post September 28, 2019, 09:34:45 PM

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Life of a Moonshiner

Corn likker simmering in the pot
Sack full of corn, sugar, yeast,
some fermenting sour mash

She plucking feathers for the chicken dinner tonight
Youngun's fishin cats and blowing up shit with the shotgun out of sight

Sun setting, moon just right
Revenue man? Fuck him and his government corrupt
God bless the U.S. of A. won by my great great great grandpa's.

And in the end of the day
sippin shine
given the son a bit of guff while admiring his gumpf
daughter though... she best watch her stuff
the wife smilen, smoken on the pipe.

Life is good in the West Virginia hills
with a dog by the side, stars overhead startin to pop
while the liquid gold drips and drops.

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Post September 29, 2019, 08:36:01 PM

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King Salmon

Aptly
or
rightfully
the king of the salmon swims with royal grace
there
far below the waves

Coral and stones watch the daily scene
Birds
Clouds
Breeze
all watching the natural wonder

And even though the reign for each is so finite and brief
it is in the struggle, the fight,
as the kings travel back to their birth place rivers
where they find a mate, spawn, pass on the decree
showing a world just why it is
they are named
king.

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Post September 30, 2019, 07:04:53 PM

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(this should be written in Chinese but English will have to do)

Listened to the Sun today
Talked with Summers last bee as it landed on my finger
Watched the sparks of welded metal
Fueled the future

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Post October 01, 2019, 10:26:50 PM

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"Cry not for me but for your children..."

How fitting those words coming from a Man, a true man who knows and as such, so very very very much, inspirational.
***

Salinity mixing into those moments called, life
A skinned knee or elbow
A first date gone awry
Sickness...
Childhood illness leading to today

Tears given by mother and father
daughter and son
even some in society
and for what?
A better way?
A better day?
Success?
Health?
Wealth?

Upon a cross he was crucified, the blood telling the very earth to shake
Leaving words of wisdom for a world of ignorance and hate
Women and men
children,
crying as if they know not
though most who know and understand
their tears are of joy even when feeling the pain
that there is a better world than this
and it is here for yesterday, today, and tomorrow;
to this
it is
good
it is
it is
it is God's gift to a world so very much
astray.

Peace

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Post October 02, 2019, 08:57:51 PM

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'starve a fever, feed a cold?' or 'feed a fever, starve a cold'. I'm sure Google has the 'correct' answer but for me, feed them both until they blow up like ripe zits.

I hate colds but must say, they are inspirational, and food does make the medicine taste better.
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The FDA has deemed this product to be safe because Obama's brother came up with the formula, and Trump wants this product banned or 1000% tariffs placed on it.

If this product does not solve your athletes foot itch you can try and get your money back by sending ten dollars and the label from this bottle to the following address...

*

"I hope you drown in snot shit head!"

I die, you die, parasite. Don't forget that.

"Not me, I will live forever!"

True, but imagine an eternal pool of snot slime...

(silence)

Yeah, I thought that would get your attention.

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Post October 03, 2019, 09:48:11 PM

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In a moment it is
In a moment, it is, gone...


Nuclear ambitions, religious bias, sexual identity... sounds like modern civilization has a bit too much time on its hands.

Writers write about such topics as above. Those wonderful stories of 'after' the bombs fall. I still like the part Tina Turner played with those survivors.

Fun to see how the news flips around from one disaster to another. One minute, the icebergs are melting, the next, some bio experiment goes awry with the potential of mass extinction.

In the good ol days, families and people in general just did the best they could to survive.Today in the land of endless lattes and endless everything, people can now dwell on whatever the heck it is that floats their boat.

Maybe it's time for a good old earth shattering disaster. Bio would be cool. Nothing better than a change to the environment. Asteroids also, but those are bit boring. Of course there are a couple on their way, which will be fun to see how scientists can come up with a good plan. But, all in all, inspirational.

Nukes, asteroids, and bio gone wild
***

She was a grand specimen, for a rock hurtling through space. She was called a 'she' because she was discovered by an amateur astronomer in a boring state called, Idaho.

Marlene had always been fascinated by the night sky and so her parents had purchased a model of telescope that was interactive with GPS and smart phone technology. It is in this technology Marlene spotted what is officially T-211. T-211 is a name for an object with a trajectory that will impact earth with %100 certainty.

Governments don't like to scare people so they don't tell people about such objects as T-211. Of course, governments and technology such as smart phones can't really keep a secret.

News of Marlene's simple discovery 'Dolly', was soon what everyone talked about. The scenario of where Dolly would hit was played out by the press. It would hit in the country of China. It would be soon. It would be, bad...

Day after day, the news grew along with the angst of the world. I could write a lot of words about it but that would only bore me, so, to cut to the chase. Chinese military officials basically said, "Fuck it..." and launched a nuclear strike on the U.S.A. which retaliated in kind and soon, all over the planet, mushroom clouds grew large and proud.

After the explosions settled, the asteroid named, Dolly, by a now vaporized astronomer, Marlene, hit China.

It was impressive, making a fairly large hole but nothing like what the nukes did. And it was ironic that for all the destruction mankind did to itself, the asteroid actually was a life giver. You see, it was a gift rock. It was covered by the species who crafted it with an altered bio-virus that would cure all human illness and reset the human genome.

If the humans had only waited, they would have been blessed with greatness and health. Now, however, the bio-virus mutated with the ample nuclear radiation and greatly aided the surviving cockroaches.

In thousands of years, the cockroaches would have universities that would discuss how foolish the once might human species was, and they would be healthy and basically, immortal.

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Post October 04, 2019, 10:57:17 PM

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Some writers can write superb stories containing situations they themselves have never come close to experiencing. Yet, some, such as ex-military and such, can write wonderful stories based in some truth of experience.

It is good if a writer can write from experience or meaningful study of the subject matter being written about. There is soooooooooo much to write about, that's for sure.

"Can I braid your nose hair?"

No parasite, you can't. Go write something meaningful.

"Okay, I'll write a story about braiding nostril hair!"

You do that parasite. I'm sure it will be a good read...
***

Bow and Arrow

Cupid knew with his silly little grin
sly in the way to pierce a heart

Robin Hood, robbing from the rich to give to the poor
aided by stellar aim of wooden shaft spin

Notched and knurl
Quiver
Released
Bulls eye
Red
Black
White
String

Fred Bear
a name true,
known for his creations
as he knew
the spirit of the drawn bow
with the arrow leading the dream.

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Post October 05, 2019, 07:38:25 PM

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Wow!

Today was a 'Wow!' moment. Rare in these fucked up times but sometimes out of no where, something happens that makes it all worth it.

I'm positive most writers have those moments where their respective good and bad days are reflected in their writing. Just look at Poe... his days were totally fucked and he wrote some fantastic stuff.

Today, while excavating holes for a new orchard, three young cowboys aged 6,7, and 9, supervised. Oh my, they supervised very well dressed in their cowboy boots and hats.

One thing lead to another and soon I had every one of them on the excavator learning how to operate it. After digging I then let each drive it like a battle tank or armored robot... It was fantastic.

While loading the machine they did not stop talking... Five tree forts, driving a tractor, home school, question after question and then... bunnies.

They showed me the bunnies which are now for sale at $5 each. Each one named. So, yep, a wow day in a world filled with the reality of shit and as such, definitely inspirational.
***

The Other Side of the Channel

Eyes seem to focus on the dazzle of grimace and complaint
Bad drivers
Angry employee's
Lying politicians
Profanity laced hate

Waking in the morning to hear anger and despair
Observing the scorn
Passing with a wave and instead getting the finger
So much corruption
So many lies
So much anger
and hurt

Growing old gains experience to see the difference
that between good and bad
and it is good to see the innocence
the smiles
the joy
only young boys and girls can glow

You see...
It is in their souls and minds
their trust in what they feel, is a good world
and in this it brings such as i, joy
though
knowing oh so well and with absolute certainty
that soon
they too
will turn the channel
becoming the other side.

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Post October 06, 2019, 09:01:58 PM

Re: Writers Parasite [Contains Adult Language & Situations]

1+1=3

"Google, what is the time in Accra Ghana?"

(silence)

and in a fog in the small valley in Vietnam, an 83 year old man choked to death, alone in his home.
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