Writers Parasite [Contains Adult Language & Situations]

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Post December 04, 2017, 10:41:33 PM

Re: Writers Parasite [Contains Adult Language & Situations]

Nerve endings bring to the front -

processing what's inside and outside
to decide



so many choices, so many reactions, so much stimulus
so many ideas, so much philosophy, so much intelligence
so much experience, so much training,
so much life...
but really
it is instincts that decide.

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Post December 06, 2017, 10:51:37 PM

Re: Writers Parasite [Contains Adult Language & Situations]

Finally finished with one job, now on to the next bazillion! All very inspiring of course. Speaking of inspired, this one is for Gary's daughter.

Poison Flows

Desert winds carry desert sands
Far above the clear waters of oceans beach
Far below the dunes stand
Whispering with heat and cold.

Once an oasis among a city of fools
Lost souls

She gossiped and snipped, her mouth full of poison
Dripping fang and claw
until the well
became tainted
waters such that no matter how much time
no matter how much sand
no matter how wind passes...

The water will never be sweet

Above the winds swirl and dance leaving the fools to thirst, to hunger, to long for

Filling their dead mouths, their dead eyes; soulless sorrow for ever eternal

Beyond the horizon the oceans waves, endless
filled with salted brine that while clear and eternal
can never be touched by nor consumed
by man or hatred.


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Post December 08, 2017, 12:03:53 AM

Re: Writers Parasite [Contains Adult Language & Situations]

music is one of this planets best and positive traits! the beat. the rhythm. the instruments. the vocals. the bass. especially the bass.

"Bass>=? which reminds me robin. you're an ass!"

Evening parasite. How'd ya like the fire? Got ya good didn't I.

"Yeah, yeah, yeah... burnt me good but not as bad as the winds torching those sorry bastards in California."

Yeah, I heard. Imagine that. Wind. Fire. Homes.

There were no roots as the flames crackle

Setting a tempo ablaze

Cries and lamenting as if keeping time

Lifetimes torched, scorched, and why?

A snap
A crackle
A pop

Embers causing propane tanks to scream
Splintering crescendo as the building boom

Winds howling in warning
for much warmer songs inside.

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Post December 08, 2017, 10:28:00 AM

Re: Writers Parasite [Contains Adult Language & Situations]

Capital letters
Capital offense
Capital punishment
Capital cities

Buttons to push like basting turkeys to slide south into the gut of consumption




Jerusalem, capital for many reasons now Capital
again, it rains, slicking up the tracks, the grease, basting the turkey again


Jew, Gentile, Muslim, Agnostic, Atheist; Capital beliefs all heading for a view...

What a capital idea!

Full speed ahead!

Headlong, in the sun we go, capital clouds mushrooming, capitals fall,
filled with capital sin

softly the sun rises now. birds sitting and knowing of the feeder. frost undisturbed with no
tracks showing. no drama. no capital inclusions. just another day.

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Post December 09, 2017, 10:54:06 PM

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People fucking people. Fucking is as old as the sperm and egg. Interesting customs the various species has. Male plumage and dance to entice a dull colored female birds. Two salmon swimming miles and miles up teeny creeks to hopefully spawn while the body is half rotten, and then, die. Lions taking over a pride, killing the previous male lions offspring, and then, fucks till it all starts again.

But, nature aside. People fucking people. Women love fucking. Men love fucking. A wonderful way to continue a species. As such, so inspiring.

And, as most writers know, sex (fucking) sells.

Tonight's inspiration is provided by powerful men such as politicians, athletes, rich people, actors... All getting fucked! Popcorn anyone?

Blood, red with oxygen and yearning
Pumping muscle of heart squeezing muscles to strut

Wallets fat with accomplishments
Some the movies
Some the politics
Some just have the power, the cash, the heart

Engorged erection rising as fast as the ambitions in so many men's hearts
Pulsing and pointing
Vocals demanding
it starts

They or him?
Ask Monica Lewinsky
when really the answer is all about
and definitely not love or a real heart

It's all about fucking
And everybody in this fucking world
gets fucked.

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Post December 11, 2017, 11:19:03 PM

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Many stories, music, poetry... So much has been presented for the various Holidays. Christmas is probably in the top three for holiday inspiration.

Lately there has been the 'blah, blah, blah,' about Christmas, X-mas, no Christ, Black Christmas, White Christmas... Like I said, 'blah,blah, blah...'

To each their own just as each has their own forms of belief, their own form of writing. I however, love Christmas and not just for the religious aspect be it whatever religion has it's belief. Pagan, Muslim, Christian, whatever...

Could you imagine a world without fruitcake? I can't. I love fruitcake. I love eggnog. Christmas music, tree's, wreaths, and LIGHTS! I love Christmas displays consisting of lights. (others doing all the work that is. I'm too lazy to stand on a ladder standing on ice and only seconds away from a 911 call)

Living out here in the boonies there just so happens to live two families next door to each other who lately have been engaged in outdoing the other. It's great! AND, it's inspirational.

Tiny bulb of excited electrons
Glimmering army of thousands

Colors so vibrant they embarrass the frost and snow
White the background
Black the sky with stars taking second place
Even the moon smiles at what it takes in with a glance

Strung out for all to see
Hung with will and determination
An electric meter spins as if on fire

Thanks China, for making my day
Walmart and Amazon for feeding the display
Neighbors who spend their coin freely

And if I get distracted while driving by your place
Swerve off the road
and hit a tree...

I'm gonna unplug all electrical lines to your place
kick your dog
go home
turn out the lights
and go to sleep.

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Post December 13, 2017, 10:33:35 AM

Re: Writers Parasite [Contains Adult Language & Situations]

Snow. Nice how quiet it is yet how heavy and how much falls. Of course, inspirational.

Sleeping softly, head nested upon a white pillow
Laying beneath white sheets
Blackness of night a blanket

High above, a traveler from the Pacific ocean takes pause
falling frozen to glide down
upon an earthly bed

Layer upon layer they fall
Crystals of beauty one and all
to also sleep softly until some heat

Waking to share a moment as the dogs flounder through
Shaking off the snow and sleep
I too, stand and pause looking outside as the terrain accumulates
turn up the heater
and go back to sleep.

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