Post December 12, 2007, 01:39:21 PM

A Day in a Life by Richard Tornello

This is a nice poignant piece about different types of lonliness, and how you can be as lonely in a crowd as you can sitting alone.

One thing I would have done differently would be put the long subtitle into the body of the poem.  I think you do need that information to best understand the piece, , but I think it would have worked better woven into the cloth of the poem itself.  A couple more lines would not have really damaged the brevity of the piece.

Definitely a thought-provoking concept, though.
Last edited by RHFay on December 12, 2007, 02:34:02 PM, edited 1 time in total.
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