Betrayal by John Powers


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Post July 24, 2018, 12:22:17 PM

Betrayal by John Powers

I guess I'm a sucker for a hot chick at the bar. This one hooked me right in and kept puling me in. When the big reveal happened I thought you might have jumped the shark, but I was wrong. You left me wanting to read the long story.

so..

is there more?
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Post August 03, 2018, 06:53:52 PM

Re: Betrayal by John Powers

Well done.

I thought the woman pulling a weapon when she did was a bit of an over reaction. I had already come to like her, but I guess that was a warning I failed to heed, for I was quite disappointed when she turned out to be the villain of the story.
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Post August 07, 2018, 09:39:28 PM

Re: Betrayal by John Powers

WJRoberts wrote:I guess I'm a sucker for a hot chick at the bar. This one hooked me right in and kept puling me in. When the big reveal happened I thought you might have jumped the shark, but I was wrong. You left me wanting to read the long story.

so..

is there more?



Yes, it's a fair size novella though but I'll have to see if there's any way to get it out for general viewing.

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