Scifaiku by RAfal Zabratysnski

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Post May 07, 2018, 09:14:14 PM

Scifaiku by RAfal Zabratysnski

Two poems caught my attention this edition. This one of course was great as it used a play of format usually not available on many websites. Poetry circle had an advanced format for creativity and maybe they still do (I could care less if they even still exist). And while Aphelion's is a bit more primitive, it still is leaps, and leaps, and leaps, and leaps X a billion, better than those (censored, censored, censored... Poetrycircle elites).

"Robin, showing your drawers again..."

Yeah, parasite, right. Anyway this one is my top pick in the poetry department. Good job and imagery.

But, now that I brought up another website that deals with poetry, they did have the ability to have a person imbed a youtube video and show poetry. Plus many other 'techno' techniques that would be cool if Aphelion had. Of course, not complaining by a looooong shot as I wish every writing related website was as nice as the people here running Aphelion and of course, those who submit such wonderful bits and pieces such as the one by Rafal.
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Post May 07, 2018, 10:08:58 PM

Re: Scifaiku by RAfal Zabratysnski

Wow, you weren't kidding! Like it!
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