Post December 14, 2016, 09:45:03 PM

Laughing Jack by S.C. Hickman

This has definitely got the creepy factor going on. I think the elements could have connected better. There's a lot going on with the noises, the hallucinations, the paranoia, the in-and-out cell phone signals, the closing door, the grandparents and their issues. It just seems like a lot and there's no foreshadowing of the mental institution escapee so he came out of nowhere and I still can't figure out how he knew Amy's name. So there were a lot of great details, but there seemed to be a lot of extraneous details and not enough details to bring me along to the ending.

If that makes any sense.