Post November 10, 2016, 11:49:37 PM

Re: We Belong Together by S.J. Budd

I agree with everything that Kate said. However, I would like to have read more showing rather than telling in this story.

Even in a short story scenes can be used, and when used strategically present the reader with
breaks that help hold one’s interest. Too much narration becomes monotonic.

However, the story was interesting! Good job!
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