Betrayal at Sea by Swargula


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Post September 14, 2016, 01:47:47 PM

Betrayal at Sea by Swargula

I enjoyed this pirate's tale; I thought it had an enchanting atmosphere, and I felt like Olston's story was complete. Poor sailor! I would like to hear more about Captain Megen and Meryn. The few little tidbits about them left me wanting more. Drudger could have used a few more details. He served a useful purpose for moving the story along, but he was rather bland and forgettable especially compared to the other three.

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Post October 01, 2016, 04:55:29 AM

Re: Betrayal at Sea by Swargula

I definitely wanted to know more about Drudger!
"It is a cardinal sin to bore the reader."
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