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It Came Out of the Condenser By George T. Philibin
The writer has a humorous style of narrative that makes the story flow more enjoyably. The blue collar dialogue was believable.
The tentacle monster part of the story was riveting.
The description in the story painted a picture. It was great!
I found some scenes really funny like the following:
"I'm gonna kill that retarded thing! You hear me retarded thing! I'm gonna kill you, you super-retard!" George said. His eyes sparked as he hit the quick release on the crane.
and this...
Then over Bert's radio we heard, "I a gonna kill every last one of those mothers! Hear me retarded-octopus-squid-things! Hear me!"
Very interesting!
The tentacle monster part of the story was riveting.
The description in the story painted a picture. It was great!
I found some scenes really funny like the following:
"I'm gonna kill that retarded thing! You hear me retarded thing! I'm gonna kill you, you super-retard!" George said. His eyes sparked as he hit the quick release on the crane.
and this...
Then over Bert's radio we heard, "I a gonna kill every last one of those mothers! Hear me retarded-octopus-squid-things! Hear me!"
Very interesting!