Poem: Cosmic Rerun by Robin B. Lipinski


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Post September 18, 2015, 07:47:20 AM

Poem: Cosmic Rerun by Robin B. Lipinski

A fairly complex entry by Robin L.

Interestingly, "Star Moon Sun" is in the middle of the Tarot Major Aracana, and they show up together here right next to each other as well.

"Does God get bored" is a fascinating religious question. The whole story of the Flood was about God making a mistake. But we presume He is happy with what He did since. But getting bored!? If we're not careful, that leads to tangles. Because if God is Perfect, He cannot get bored...

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Post September 18, 2015, 11:35:51 AM

Re: Poem: Cosmic Rerun by Robin B. Lipinski

A Feeling

Bearing a burden of sorte; weighted by stone of knowledge
Ignorance graced with awakened pulsar
Heart of the Monster flows the water of life.

Look children of what...what?
Hear the voice of what...what?
Feel the touch of what...what?
and know...what?

This and those and these, a question.
Answered before asked yet with asking escapes the question.
Flowing water of life to carry mud and debris
sounding a bit...cosmic?

Womb given by what can only be real and exploited.
So simple in success to skip stones across the water or fail by drowning
with a sun shining above storm laden cloud.

Feel children this life abounding, around the May pole dancing.
Last gasp of water vapor replaced with the moist cry of born,
to keep the search of knowledge going.

Amen
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Post September 18, 2015, 07:13:10 PM

Re: Poem: Cosmic Rerun by Robin B. Lipinski

More than a Feeling

Walking a garden of flowers; waiting all alone to challenge
another's knowledge in the sunshine
Mouth of the Maiden swallows the water of life.


Feel the touch of what...what?
Hear the sounds of what...what?
Feel the shake of what..what?
and know...what?

Up and down and and in and out, a quest.
Taken before asked yet without asking escapes, the quest.
Flowing water of life to carry seed and flower
sounding a bit...orgasmic?

Womb given by what can only be real and exploited.
So simple in success to skip steps asking or fail by taking
with a sun shining above storm laden cloud.

Feel woman this life throbbing, around my May pole darling.
Last gasp of my rapier replaced with the moist cry of the torn,
to keep the search of knowledge going.

Amen
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Post September 19, 2015, 01:20:36 AM

Re: Poem: Cosmic Rerun by Robin B. Lipinski

An Orgasm

Stamen to stick the pistil: orgy tilled soil of epic proportions
aware only of wind, water and sun
Gamete's released in profusion.

Feel the touch of what...what?
Hear the sounds of what...what?
Look at the seeds of what...what?
and know..shat?

Fertilized mind full of womb-like intentions
Young lad twirls the flowers stem thinking of young maiden
Soon gurgling sounds of watery fluids released
fertilizing ground with seed.

What comes must come from the festive May pole twirl
A smile
A kiss
A tumble

To plow and furrow never to lay
-Fallow thoughts can never conceive-
leaving a world with new children,
children to play the garden, and the teen, to change...
Such is the way of a world of knowledge.

Amen

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