Post August 05, 2015, 01:19:40 PM

Flash: In Sheep's Clothing by Hallie M. Smith

This one starts off a bit uneven. Flash is a tricky form because it has to be so compact!

*Version 2!* I almost missed it!

"carts, people, and horse manure ..." - and I think "Constable" is British. So could be in the 1750's. So that makes me feel a little better. Maybe one more sentence could have been good to really let the reader know where and when things are.

But I think "Constable" is a title that post-dates at least early rifles, so they must have tried those years before to no avail. But maybe it's all a bit much to guess.

So it gets going, it finishes off in a nice tone!