Post August 05, 2015, 11:47:37 AM

Poem: Caves Of Mars by Denny E Marshall

Okay, this is a poem where reader impressions might differ. It relies heavily on the use of repetition. I will leave for others to ponder this alternate version with the repeated lines deleted.

Exploring the forgotten caves on Mars
With mile of roads and winding passages
Gone is the red haze sky the glow of stars
Upon lines of railways with silver cars
Etched on wall scrolls of hidden messages

As such, there is plenty of evocative things here!