The Waiting Room by J.E. Deegan


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Post April 06, 2015, 03:28:24 PM

The Waiting Room by J.E. Deegan

This is a perfectly fine "twilight-zone-ish" sort of story. There isn't anything I could suggest to improve it. It gets in, does its job, and gets out ... with a little "ha-ha" curly-cue sort-of-twist at the end to punctuate the conclusion.

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Post April 06, 2015, 07:47:23 PM

Re: The Waiting Room

I really like the idea of a cafe as a waiting station after death. A fun read that nicely turns at the end. Leaves the reader with a good sense of wonder.

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