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My Little Birds by Mark Altenhofen

PostPosted: March 22, 2015, 08:34:43 PM
by kailhofer
This story was this author's first published story, and I'm sure he'd love some input on how well it read. As I had other discussions with him, I'd rather see others comment on how it went. I liked the main character's slow slide into what seems like madness, but it's actually the opposite. He was delusional and by the end we see reality--just before his own end.

BTW, this was also the first ever snail-mail submission I've received (made through special arrangement... don't try it yourself).