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Heaven-121 by Ryan Sexton
The story kept my interest throughout, and the pacing worked well for me. Yet in the end my impression might possibly be summarised by a quote from the story itself:
"I've got to wonder. What exactly do those creeps get out of it anyways? What's the point?"