Post December 18, 2014, 02:24:27 PM

Working Vacation by Graeme Tennant

I saw where it was going pretty early on. It was enjoyable despite that. Your descriptions are excellent. Good Job! Glad I read it.
Remember: when people tell you something’s wrong or doesn’t work for them, they are almost always right. When they tell you exactly what they think is wrong and how to fix it, they are almost always wrong. – Neil Gaiman