Post December 12, 2014, 10:44:47 AM

Killer by Nicholas Sherry

Unredemptive horror based blatantly on urban legend. I am afraid you get no points for concept ingenuity Mr. Sherry. That being said it is very well written and creates the proper mood when read. I enjoyed reading it as an excercise in interpretation of a trope. I am glad you submitted it here as it was certainly worth the time to read. You did well with a much told story. Good Job!
Remember: when people tell you something’s wrong or doesn’t work for them, they are almost always right. When they tell you exactly what they think is wrong and how to fix it, they are almost always wrong. – Neil Gaiman