Derrick by Brandon Crilly


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Post October 05, 2014, 09:17:30 PM

Derrick by Brandon Crilly

Quite amusing. Interesting back story that shows through with a minimum amount of explanation. Hint of murder at the end is good swerve. I expect with that length and style it should be likely I will see something from Mr. Crilly in the flash section soon perhaps?
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Post October 24, 2014, 01:59:57 AM

Re: Derrick by Brandon Crilly

Delightful!

This story is easy to read, but the implicit and explicit join forces to make a whole that's greater than the sum of its parts.

Good job, and I hope to see more from this writer.
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