Filaments by Richard Tornello

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Post October 05, 2014, 09:09:58 PM

Filaments by Richard Tornello

Good form. A bit creepy. Kinda sci fi with a hint of Lovecraft. Nice work.
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Post October 06, 2014, 11:06:10 AM

Re: Filaments by Richard Tornello

Inside the brain of some supreme entity. God, or other?

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Post October 24, 2014, 01:03:33 PM

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Yeah, Richard - that sounds like the Mind of God to me. Maybe there are universes inside your brain too. Perhaps you are someone else's god. I remember this movie where a woman says - "I used to think the day would come when the only address I'd need to get a letter to ___ ____ was to write '____ ____ New York State, the Mind of God'."
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Post October 24, 2014, 05:41:31 PM

Re: Filaments by Richard Tornello

just an observation, the micro mirrors the macro, in a holographic manner.

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