Breaking the Cycle by Ed Sullivan

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Post August 23, 2014, 11:22:46 PM

Breaking the Cycle by Ed Sullivan

This short story takes the superhero on a different path than I expected. I like the dialogue of the villain; he sounds much more intelligent than his adversary. I think the last paragraph is entirely narrative because there is no one left to address. It wraps up the story and sets up the characters for another round. I enjoyed the writing and the plot.
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Post August 24, 2014, 12:13:35 AM

Re: Breaking the Cycle by Ed Sullivan

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Post August 27, 2014, 09:05:14 PM

Re: Breaking the Cycle by Ed Sullivan

I love this story! Finally, a supervillian/superspy story that ends sensibly!

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