Silence the Crows by Ed Sullivan


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Post August 11, 2014, 10:30:23 PM

Silence the Crows by Ed Sullivan

In the final scene, I thought the dialogue was particularly realistic. This story reminds me of a 2000 film, The Cell, that dramatizes a similar theme. Perhaps Mr. Sullivan will offer another chapter.
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Post August 20, 2014, 10:52:33 PM

Re: Silence the Crows by Ed Sullivan

The sequel has been submitted as requested. It will be up to the powers that be as to when it is published.
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Post August 31, 2014, 02:11:32 AM

Re: Silence the Crows by Ed Sullivan

Glad to know there's a sequel on the way; this feels unfinished.

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