Sean Chaide by Richard Tornello

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Post August 06, 2014, 07:58:41 PM

Sean Chaide by Richard Tornello

Good story. I can't help feeling the concept is somewhat familiar though! :lol:
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Post August 06, 2014, 09:13:55 PM

Re: Sean Chaide by Richard Tornello

yep it was my first one for the flash back 2. I didn't want to cut it down. So I wrote the other one that no one seemed to like too much.

WDF, I liked it.
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Post August 17, 2014, 12:55:22 AM

Re: Sean Chaide by Richard Tornello

I noticed right off that this was some kind of rewrite of your Scheherazade flash. I think I like this one better; the mutual challenge at the end is intriguing--and I wonder if it's an opportunity for her to poison him. I was expecting that, actually. Glad you didn't tell us.
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