WI-zard by Lipinski


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Post August 04, 2014, 12:20:34 AM

WI-zard by Lipinski

Dark, dark. Almost always dark. Written by a mad man? Either way I look at it, it's still from the planet earth.

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Post August 04, 2014, 10:54:45 AM

Re: WI-zard by Lipinski

thanks for commenting and reading rick, no matter how bright the sun, mankind is always followed by a shadow. thanks also for the inspiration.
***

Light

Conceived...in the darkness of deceit; backseat, backdoor, back-of-the mind
To harbor and grow in a womb of situations, most to never see agreement
Father
Mother
until what is,
must be.

All around a round body, firm breasts of sorts
Belly swollen, filled with red and black
what is
comes.

Suckled teats drip with past regrets under the guise of full potential;
now left to shrivel as what is
comes.

Story after story this cycle repeats
Worship of gods, of self; blinded by seeming aloofness until
what is
comes.

Death.
Death.
Death.

Deaths dark shadow, almost comforting to return to the blackness...
what is
comes.

For few though, few in spirit but filled in hollow shell of blackness, sinew, skin...
To shed a worldly skin of names endless; despertarse
now the bosom name reflected, a shadow no more
this obvious trail of light.
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Post August 04, 2014, 11:56:50 AM

Re: WI-zard by Lipinski

You realize of course that mad is used and includes all definitions here.

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Post August 04, 2014, 04:53:32 PM

Re: WI-zard by Lipinski

The mad hatter (conjunctive this hatter to hate?) Of course mercury fumes inhaled like a rich bouquet steeping the mind like Alice In Wonderlands world, though not in tea but flowers...It matters not to me as only the folly of mankind is/ just mad about their respective love of self, you see? Madly in love, mad about you, mad man, man made mad, bad...hate?

Zard. g-od of a mind made, realization of course when a mind is feeble, unable to see, to smell the bouquet, to work the brim of the hat as only hate is what they see; liquid metal to tell and make mad one when there is cold or heat.

Who is this Robin B. Lipinski, this R rick tornello, this Alice, this mad hatter if nothing but hate?

Ah, yes, zard, all hail Zard - is/just mad about their respective love of self, you see? Madly in love, mad about you mad man, man made bad,

and
there
is
no
question
about what is/just
this dark world of death and hate.
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Post August 04, 2014, 05:17:51 PM

Re: WI-zard by Lipinski

It may sound pollyannaish, to answer your latest question, and I'm not too sure about it, your question that is, or is it a statement but,
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What about children? I don't see them fitting into your weltanschauung as you've poetically provided over the time period you have contributed here.
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It's an observation.
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I would request that an answer be in prose which would help to clarify, since poetry, having so many rhythms, interpretations and meanings, because otherwise as such we might just be talking past one another as opposed to having a discussion.

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