Libro Redux by David Ulnar-Slew


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Post June 21, 2014, 01:50:05 PM

Libro Redux by David Ulnar-Slew

No previous knowledge required—this is a good read. I thought it suggests the Tree in the Garden. It’s fine writing. Enjoy.
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Post June 26, 2014, 04:32:37 PM

Re: Libro Redux by David Ulnar-Slew

A chapter in a longer story.

It held its own and could be part of something bigger.

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Post July 04, 2014, 04:52:04 PM

Re: Libro Redux by David Ulnar-Slew

Good tension between the two, but the paragraphs were too long and the ending too abrupt, I thought.

Nice (?) touch in that the MC's suicide would prevent the book from totally corrupting him, but would still give the book more power. The book wins either way. Great dilemma.

This does seem incomplete.
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