DIVA.exe by Wesson


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Post June 11, 2014, 08:56:44 AM

DIVA.exe by Wesson

The premise is very similiar to a few movies I liked. It actually rmeinded me more of the Pacino movie "SIM.ONE" It was written well. I enjoyed it.
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Post June 11, 2014, 04:56:45 PM

Re: DIVA.exe by Wesson

This writer can always deliver an interesting storyline and a ornate literary fabric.

He's just good!
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Post June 12, 2014, 12:43:49 AM

Re: DIVA.exe by Wesson

Thank you for reading! I accidently submitted an older version of this story so I apologize if it reads a little choppy or has any typos. As always I appreciate your input Mark, let me know if you need any additional help with Creator and Catalyst.
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Post June 23, 2014, 09:35:28 PM

Re: DIVA.exe by Wesson

Good story. The pacing and flow seemed a little too uniform, though.

Pink hair, okay, but -- pink eyes? NO, no, nononono . . .

Anyway, the ending was unexpected. Gotta wonder how plain ole Sue is going to cope with that.
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Post June 24, 2014, 10:38:48 AM

Re: DIVA.exe by Wesson

Thank you for reading, Lester.

Lester Curtis wrote:Pink hair, okay, but -- pink eyes? NO, no, nononono . . .

Ha, ha! Sorry, the character I based Rena on had pink hair and eyes.
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